雅思小作文如何獲取高分?論“比較”在其中的體現(xiàn)!
發(fā)布者:北雅國際英語 發(fā)布時間:2022-11-23 09:50
雅思小作文雖然在整個寫作中占比只有1/3,導致很多考生都會忽略對它的學習,但其實它卻是幫助寫作得到高分的關(guān)鍵。
因此好好研究小作文很有必要的,今天Doris帶大家探討探討“比較”在雅思小作文中的體現(xiàn)。
為何要有“比較”
在小作文的題目要求中,明確說明了要進行數(shù)據(jù)的比較,即
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
而且,我們在分析各種不同類型的數(shù)據(jù)圖表的時候,是離不開比較的。通過對比不同的對象,才能突出數(shù)據(jù)的一些特征,回應題目要求中的”main features”。
比較分為兩個大類:
同一時刻的比較
整體趨勢的比較
1. 同一時刻的比較
以起始點為例
在1979年這個時間點上,牛肉的消耗量最大,羊肉和雞肉的消耗量是一樣的,魚肉的消耗量是最少的,還可以體現(xiàn)一定的倍數(shù)關(guān)系。
表示最大
Sth be the most popular /important/widely used
Sth rank the first among...
Sth be the highest/the largest
例:
In 1979, beef was the most popular among these four types of meat, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week.
In 1979, beef ranked the first among these four types of meat, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week.
In 1979, the consumption of beef was the highest among these four types of meat, with about 225 grams.
表示相等
Both ...and ...be+數(shù)據(jù)
...and ...share same quantities/amount/number
... and ... be similar/same
例:
Both the consumption of beef and chicken was 50 kg in 1979.
The consumption of beef and chicken shared same quantities in 1979.(about 50kg)
The consumption of beef and chicken was similar in 1979. (about 50 kg)
表示最小
Sth be lowest/fewest
Sth have a minimal figure in its +表格主題詞
例:
The fish consumption was lowest, at only 75 grams in 1979.
Fish had a minimal figure in its consumption, at only 75 grams in 1979.
倍數(shù)關(guān)系
A be twice/... times as much as B
A be..., which was .... times as much as B
A be...,tripling/doubling B
例:
The consumption of lamb was twice as much as that of fish in 1979.
The consumption of lamb was about 150 grams per person per week, which was twice as much as that of fish consumption.
The consumption of lamb was about 150 grams per person per week, doubling that of fish.
2. 整體趨勢的比較
肉、魚肉和雞肉的的消耗量的變化趨勢分別是上升、上升、上升、下降。通過進一步趨勢的比較,我們可以得出,牛肉和羊肉消耗量的趨勢是完全相同的;魚肉消耗量和上面兩個的變化趨勢是部分相同的(上升,但是幅度小很多);雞肉消耗量的趨勢是完全相反的。
完全相同
Both ...and...變化趨勢(V)
...變化趨勢. Also,...show a similar trend
例:
Both beef and lamb consumption decreased significantly to about 100 grams and 80 grams respectively in the next 25 years.
Beef consumption decreased significantly to about 100 grams in the next 25 years. Also, that of lamb showed a similar trend, reaching 80 grams.
Also, Electricity produced from solar showed a similar trend.
部分相同
Also...but
The figure for fish also declined,but less significantly
完全相反
However/ on the other hand/by contrast/ oppositely,...show an opposite trend.
例:
However,the consumption of chicken showed an opposite trend, increasing dramatically to approximately 250 grams per person per week in the end.
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